BarfBlog – Criteriaand Evaluation Review
-Up-to-date posts (videos, stories, news, etc.)
-Engaging and faintly humorous ton
-Providing insight into relevant and relatable events, mainly withhealth or food related issues.
-Having a greater goal than what is directly written in the posts. (food poisoning post leading to stronger FDA regulations)
-Interesting pictures, most of which don't directly relate to the post or topic being discussed.
-Reaching broader audience through teaching lessons in each posts.
-Tags including easier access to posts and related topics.
BarfBlog – Evaluation
Five second rule, snack after school, exhausted, tired and hungry. You dropped the last few chips on the ground, and well now you have no other choice but to push your laziness aside and whip up another round of food. So you decide you'd prefer going a but more international to celebrate your completely satisfy your hunger so you make an international feast of food. However what you realize after is that not only has the food troubled your stomach you're now stuff k with a night of puking. but dont worry, all you need now is a simple way to keep yourself entertained while you consume your bubbling ginger ale and your crunchy white crackers. What better way to do this than go on BarfBlog.com.
Barf Blog, a fun and surprisingly useful way to understand all the different areas of food, health and of course people's interesting opinions. It's completely free and definitely easy to use. Therefore don't be intimidated by the weird pictures or the boldest tags at the end, rather explore this blog to your hearts content.
Food impacts our lives in every way, no matter how small the crumb or how grand the burger. BarfBlog does a wondeful job of pointing fingers at how food really affects us: physically, mentally, financially and even emotionally. Through posts, which include videos, pictures of various kinds, and bonded texts they show us a world we don't even consider bothering about. The Barf Blog is not only relevant and informing but also humorous and engaging with the readers. The blog is run by Drs. Powell, Chapman, Hubbell and friends, the blog is filled with opinions and reports of food-related incidents. BarfBlog focuses on providing information and updates on food safety and policy that may have not been addressed by our governments. So while you drink that ginger ale of yours don't forget to take the time to enlighten yourself, but most importantly your brain.
Food impacts our lives in every way, no matter how small the crumb or how grand the burger. BarfBlog does a wondeful job of pointing fingers at how food really affects us: physically, mentally, financially and even emotionally. Through posts, which include videos, pictures of various kinds, and bonded texts they show us a world we don't even consider bothering about. The Barf Blog is not only relevant and informing but also humorous and engaging with the readers. The blog is run by Drs. Powell, Chapman, Hubbell and friends, the blog is filled with opinions and reports of food-related incidents. BarfBlog focuses on providing information and updates on food safety and policy that may have not been addressed by our governments. So while you drink that ginger ale of yours don't forget to take the time to enlighten yourself, but most importantly your brain.
Samiha
ReplyDeleteGreat Job on your blog. I loved your introduction! it was very strong and interesting!! I think you did a good job but you could have expanded on some of your points. I picked a specific article and that could have possibly helped. I think you could have included more description. However, overall you did a wonderful job.
Stewart
Samiha, I really enjoyed this blog! You did a nice job of doing a really overall picture analysis of the blog. I think you could have made a few more specific references to how it meets the criteria you created, but it still got the job done. There are a few grammatical errors that could be fixed (I was a little confused towards the beginning) but overall really nice job!
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ReplyDeleteSamiha, as Millie and Stewart point out, the tone is great here, but you have almost no details about the blog. The sweeping generalities don't tell us much: "Through posts, which include videos, pictures of various kinds, and bonded texts they show us a world we don't even consider bothering about. The Barf Blog is not only relevant and informing but also humorous and engaging with the readers." From your intro, I know that it's something about barf and probably food poisoning, but not much else. For example, you could say "Through posts that cover topics from food poisoning to biting soccer players, through videos about E.Coli in Canada to sour mayonnaise in New Orleans..." And so on. And then we know what we will find on this blog.
ReplyDeletep.s. my deleted comment was nothing sinister--just this one, but half-finished and erroneously posted